The Exact Keywords Examiners Want In AS Law Answers (And What To Avoid)
Why Keywords Matter More Than Length
- Examiners mark using tight AO1/AO2 descriptors.
- Keywords signal:
a. legal accuracy
b. element recognition
c. correct case usage
d. proper sequencing - Using the “right words” makes examiners instantly comfortable.
- Using vague or casual words makes answers look untrained.
- A* students carefully select high-precision keywords to match the marking scheme.
- Weak students use “normal English words,” which lose marks.
The A Rule: Every Bullet Must Contain A “Mark-Trigger Word”*
These are the exact words that activate marks:
- establish
- satisfy
- amount to
- constitute
- demonstrate
- indicate
- likely
- purpose
- virtual certainty
- assumption of rights
- effective entry
- foreseeable
- significant operating cause
- honest belief
- objective standard
Examiners EXPECT these.
Using them = high AO1/AO2 scores automatically.
Table 1: Keywords That Examiners Reward Instantly
| Category | High-Value Keywords | Why They Work |
|---|---|---|
| AO1 Definitions | “assumption of rights” / “possession or control” / “virtual certainty” | shows legal precision |
| AO2 Application | “on these facts” / “this indicates” / “here,” / “therefore likely” | shows strong linkage |
| Causation | “but-for” / “foreseeable escape” / “reasonable act” / “thin skull” | examiner-approved |
| Robbery | “modifies movement” / “force applied” / “in order to steal” | matches s8 wording |
| Burglary | “effective entry” / “trespass” / “intent at entry” | linked to s9 |
| Criminal Damage | “temporary impairment” / “reckless as to risk” | Hardman + R v G language |
| Evaluation | “strength is” / “weakness arises” / “alternative view” | AO3 keywords |
These are exactly the words examiners tick.
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The Top 50 Keywords Examiners WANT To See
For Theft
- assumption of rights
- s3 appropriation
- s4 property
- s5 possession/control
- objective dishonesty (Ivey)
- treat as own (s6)
- intent to permanently deprive
For Robbery
- force modifies movement
- minimal force sufficient
- force on property counts
- immediately before/at time
- in order to steal
For Burglary
- effective entry
- partial entry sufficient
- no permission (trespass)
- intent at entry (s9(1)(a))
- theft/GBH inside (s9(1)(b))
For Criminal Damage
- temporary impairment
- damage to property
- reckless as to risk
- honest belief in consent
- lawful excuse
For Causation
- but-for
- significant and operating cause
- foreseeable escape
- reasonable response
- thin skull applies
For Mens Rea
- aim/purpose
- virtual certainty
- foresight of risk
- subjective awareness
For Interpretation (ELS)
- literal meaning
- avoid absurdity
- intention of Parliament
- contextual meaning
- ejusdem generis / noscitur / expressio
Using these = automatic alignment with exam jargon.
The Words You MUST Avoid (They Lose Marks)
| Bad Keyword | Why It Loses Marks |
|---|---|
| “maybe” | uncertainty = low AO2 |
| “sort of” | informal, vague |
| “looks like” | no legal certainty |
| “basically” | non-legal |
| “kind of like” | childlike phrasing |
| “feels like” | irrelevant to law |
| “he clearly did wrong” | moral, not legal |
| “in my opinion” | NEVER use in Law |
| “the case story says” | case facts = zero marks |
| “he committed all crimes” | vague, no detail |
| “I think” | personal view = useless |
| “this reminds me of” | irrelevant |
Weak students lose marks because they write like this.
High-Value Keywords For AO2 (Application)
Use these in almost EVERY application line:
- “here,”
- “on these facts,”
- “therefore,”
- “this indicates,”
- “this amounts to,”
- “this satisfies the requirement,”
- “thus,”
- “consequently,”
- “it is likely that,”
These words guide examiners through your logic line-by-line.
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Exact Keywords For Each Major Offence
THEFT (s1–7)
Use:
- appropriation
- assumption of rights
- s3
- property (s4)
- possession or control
- belonging to another
- objective dishonesty
- reasonable person
- Ivey standard
- treat as own
- intent to permanently deprive
- s6
Avoid:
- “he stole”
- “he took something”
- “this is stealing”
- “this is wrong”
ROBBERY (s8)
Use:
- force
- modifies movement
- minimal force sufficient
- immediately before/at the time
- in order to steal
- Dawson & James
- Clouden
Avoid:
- “he violently ran away”
- “he was aggressive”
- “the victim felt scared” (irrelevant)
Emotional words = wasted time.
BURGLARY (s9)
Use:
- effective entry
- partial entry
- trespass
- no permission
- intent at entry
- s9(1)(a) vs s9(1)(b)
- Collins
- Brown
- Ryan
Avoid:
- “breaking in” (NOT a legal requirement)
- “forced himself inside”
- “he climbed rudely” (irrelevant)
Legal wording matters.
CRIMINAL DAMAGE
Use:
- destroy/damage
- temporary impairment
- property
- belongs to another
- reckless as to risk
- significant risk
- lawful excuse
- honest belief
- Hardman
- Jaggard
Avoid:
- “he ruined it a bit”
- “he made it dirty”
- “the thing got bad”
We need legal terms.
CAUSATION
Use:
- but-for
- factual cause
- legal cause
- significant and operating
- foreseeable escape
- Roberts
- reasonable act
- Pagett
- thin skull
- Blaue
Avoid:
- “because of him it happened”
- “it’s his fault”
- “he caused everything”
These sound childish.
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Exact Keywords For ELS Questions (Interpretation, Precedent, DL)
STATUTORY INTERPRETATION
Use:
- literal rule
- ordinary meaning
- mischief rule
- defect in earlier law
- purposive approach
- legislative intention
- intrinsic aids
- extrinsic aids
- Pepper v Hart
- Hansard
Avoid:
- “they guess the meaning”
- “they decide randomly”
- “they interpret however they want”
JUDICIAL PRECEDENT
Use:
- ratio decidendi
- obiter dicta
- binding
- persuasive
- hierarchy
- Practice Statement
- departures
- distinguishing
- overruling
- reversing
Avoid:
- “judges follow each other loosely”
- “judges usually agree”
- “court copies decision”
DELEGATED LEGISLATION
Use:
- statutory instrument
- Orders in Council
- bylaws
- enabling Act
- ultra vires
- procedural vs substantive ultra vires
- affirmative resolution
- negative resolution
Avoid:
- “small laws”
- “government shortcuts”
- “rules made quickly”
These terms are imprecise.
Police Powers (PACE)
Use:
- reasonable suspicion
- necessity
- stop and search
- arrest
- detention limits
- Codes of Practice
- admissibility
- exclusion of evidence
Avoid:
- “police can do whatever they want”
- “police just check people randomly”
Not acceptable.
USE THIS WORD LIST AS CHECKLIST BEFORE SUBMITTING ANY EXAM ANSWER
1. Did you use legal keywords instead of normal words?
2. Did you use case names as labels?
3. Did you avoid emotional/vague words?
4. Did your bullets use high-value verbs?
5. Did you avoid any forbidden phrases?
6. Did every element have a precision keyword?
7. Did you conclude each block with certainty words like “likely”, “therefore”, “conclude”?
This is EXACTLY how A* students write.
