Tracking Character Feelings and Attitudes
10. Tracking Character Feelings and Attitudes
Why This Topic is Extremely Important
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Frequently tested in:
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Q1(h) (3 marks)
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Other inference questions in Q1
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Requires:
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R2 (implicit meaning)
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understanding of emotional development
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Many students lose marks because they:
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give vague emotions
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fail to support answers
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repeat the same idea
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What Does “Tracking Feelings” Mean?
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You must:
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identify emotions
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show how they change or develop
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support with evidence
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Key Rule
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Feelings are NOT random
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They must:
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come from the text
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be logically supported
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Types of Feelings Commonly Tested
1. Fear / Anxiety
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signs:
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running
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hesitation
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nervous actions
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2. Confusion
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signs:
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questioning
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lack of understanding
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3. Hope / Relief
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signs:
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positive change
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opportunity
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4. Determination
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signs:
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persistence
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strong decisions
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5. Admiration / Fascination
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signs:
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detailed description
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positive tone
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How Feelings Are Tested in Exam
Question Type
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“Explain how his feelings change”
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“What are his feelings about…”
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“Give three details showing feelings…”
Step-by-Step Method
Step 1: Identify Emotion
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Read text carefully
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Look for:
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actions
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dialogue
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description
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Step 2: Use Precise Word
Avoid:
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“bad”
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“good”
Use:
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scared
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confused
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relieved
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impressed
Step 3: Support with Evidence
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Quote or paraphrase detail
Step 4: Repeat for Required Points
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If 3 marks → give 3 different feelings
Example
Text idea:
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character sees something overwhelming
Answer:
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shocked
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“stunned by the sudden sight”
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confused
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“Notice what?”
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scared
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“there is nowhere to go”
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Written and Compiled By Sir Hunain Zia, World Record Holder With 154 Total A Grades, 7 Distinctions and 11 World Records For Educate A Change O Level And IGCSE English Language Full Scale Course
How Feelings Change (Development)
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Strong answers show:
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progression
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Example Flow
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shocked → confused → scared → determined
Why This Matters
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Shows deeper understanding
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Gains higher marks
Weak vs Strong Answers
Weak
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he is scared
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he is frightened
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he is afraid
Problem:
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repetition of same idea
Strong
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shocked
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confused
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determined
Common Mistakes
Mistake 1: Repeating Same Feeling
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synonyms used as separate points
Mistake 2: No Evidence
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missing support from text
Mistake 3: Wrong Emotion
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not matching text
Mistake 4: Vague Language
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“he feels bad”
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Advanced Strategy (A* Level)
Link Feeling to Situation
Example:
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scared because he cannot escape
Use Strong Vocabulary
Instead of:
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“sad”
Use:
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distressed
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anxious
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uneasy
Identify Turning Points
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Moments where feeling changes
Multi-Mark Question Strategy
For 3 Marks
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Give:
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3 different feelings
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each supported
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Structure
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Feeling → evidence
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Feeling → evidence
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Feeling → evidence
Examiner Expectation
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Marks given for:
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clear identification
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relevant evidence
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No extra marks for:
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long writing
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Final Strategy
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Always:
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identify → support
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Ensure:
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each point is different
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Final Insight
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Tracking feelings is not guessing
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It is:
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reading carefully
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interpreting correctly
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Students who master this:
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secure full marks in Q1(h)
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Written and Compiled By Sir Hunain Zia, World Record Holder With 154 Total A Grades, 7 Distinctions and 11 World Records For Educate A Change O Level And IGCSE English Language Full Scale Course