Write A Story In Which A Stranger Plays An Important Role.
Complete Question
Write A Story In Which A Stranger Plays An Important Role.
Question Type
Story Writing
Course
O Level And IGCSE English Language Full Scale Course
Planning & Thought Process
- Opening: Introduce ordinary situation (public place)
- Development: Stranger appears subtly → curiosity builds
- Flashback: Past experience influencing narrator’s reaction
- Climax: Stranger’s action changes situation
- Ending: Realisation of importance of stranger
- Techniques: Realism, character focus, gradual reveal
Model Answer
The bus was already crowded when I stepped on, and for a moment, I considered getting off and waiting for the next one. However, I moved forward anyway, finding a place near the middle where I could stand. The air was warm, filled with quiet conversations and the occasional sound of movement as people adjusted their positions.
Written and Compiled By Sir Hunain Zia (AYLOTI), World Record Holder With 154 Total A Grades, 11 World Records And 7 Distinctions, Educate A Change — O Level And IGCSE English Language Full Scale Course.
I noticed him after a few minutes. He was sitting near the window, looking outside without much expression. There was nothing unusual about him at first glance, yet something about his stillness made him stand out from the rest of the passengers. While others were occupied with their phones or conversations, he remained completely focused on the passing streets.
As the journey continued, I became aware of a small problem. I reached into my pocket to check my fare and realised that my wallet was missing. I searched again, more carefully this time, but it was not there. The realisation came quickly — I must have left it behind.
A memory surfaced then, reminding me of a similar situation from the past, when I had been caught unprepared and had faced the consequences. This time, however, there was no easy solution. The conductor was already moving through the bus, checking tickets and collecting fares.
I looked around, unsure of what to do. It was then that the stranger stood up. Without saying anything, he moved slightly closer and handed me the exact amount I needed. For a moment, I did not react. The gesture was unexpected, simple, yet difficult to fully understand.
Written and Compiled By Sir Hunain Zia (AYLOTI), World Record Holder With 154 Total A Grades, 11 World Records And 7 Distinctions, Educate A Change — O Level And IGCSE English Language Full Scale Course.
I tried to thank him, but he only nodded briefly before returning to his seat. There was no conversation, no explanation. The situation passed quickly, and the bus continued as if nothing had happened.
When I finally stepped off, I realised that the moment had stayed with me longer than I had expected. The stranger had not just solved a small problem. He had reminded me that even brief encounters can leave a lasting impression.
Written and Compiled By Sir Hunain Zia (AYLOTI), World Record Holder With 154 Total A Grades, 11 World Records And 7 Distinctions, Educate A Change — O Level And IGCSE English Language Full Scale Course.
Good Things About This Narration
- Realistic, relatable scenario (exam-friendly)
- Strong role of stranger without exaggeration
- Smooth flow from problem → resolution
- Flashback adds depth to narrator’s thinking
- Balanced, natural ending with meaningful reflection